sanity

sanity

A Poem by kirsten773
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i dont know how(or why) i wrote this poem, but i love it. (:

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come with me
and step into the other side of sanity
grass grows down 
and a smile is a frown
daytime is dark
water starts a spark
stability is caused by movement
and puzzle pieces just wont fit
the stars in the daytime sky shine so dim
pictures of flowers are so grim
corpses roam the roads
and the heat is so cold
come with me
and step into the other side of sanity

© 2011 kirsten773


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This could be song lyrics.im feelin the beat

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this poem was good. I loved how you used a poem to express a story type thing. I am not sure if that is where you were going but this was very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great. I was very pleasantly surprised when I read this.
Thanks for the smile.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem so much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, beautiful... I love the way you describe everything ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written,
Love the rhyme scheme.
Amazing write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you play with words in a lovely melodic way.. the imagery fits and the streaming lines are easy to absorb.. great work..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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kirsten773
kirsten773

morongo valley, ca., CA



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