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Untitiled

A Poem by Drew

I have stood fists clenched

Against an endless sea of challenge

Where once an insatiable will

Pulsed through my viens

I now grow old and tired

With out stretched hand

Grasping

Empty

I am weak

How much more

How much more

I scream out

 in a voice unheard

How much more

 

© 2008 Drew


Author's Note

Drew
Ever have one of those days? Help me find a title plz

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This is good but I can't really pick up on what you are talking about, just because of the way you've written it. To me this could have so many different meanings and due to this I'm sorry to say that I have no idea about a title for it. Sorry

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Drew
Drew

Las Vegas, NV



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