violins voice

A violins song

The violins voice flows around me.
Makes me shiver and shake as it fills me to the brim.
It's only when the violins voice stops that I can speak again.
I ask it to continue so we can continue our dance.
It complies slowly at first then faster as It follows along.
It never stops again to enchanted with its own song.

Reviews

[sodapopkid]

This is really quite lovely. The combination of dance and the violin conjures a beautiful image.

[Madeleine Poisson]

The diction of this poem really transports me to times when I myself have been hypnotized by music. I can practically see the music flowing around your narrator as they listen to the violin play its music. The line that speaks to me the most would probably be:

"It's only when the violins voice stops that I can speak again."

So true to the experience. Great job!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

interesting instrument the violin...my friend plays and the way you say the words to this...seems your a violinist yourself...you become one with your art...