Endless Mourning

A little life just arrived
With the first breath
He cried and cried
Till his throat dried

An angel of love
With pure heart
Absorbed all his pain
He called her mother
For a moment he thought
He cried in vain

The dark storm
The endless rain
Took away his Angel
There is just sea of pain

Years passed sailing
In the lonely sea
But one day again
A beautiful fairy
Touched his heart

The beautiful time
All songs rhyme
He never knew
What was his crime

The cruel and cold
Infinite dark sword
That heartless Death hold
Slaughtered his every dream

His love was endless sea
With no one left to love
With every heart beat
The tears of blood
Drowned him in
The oblivion
The oblivion of
Endless mourning....

Shivalik kalsotra

Reviews

[Ruth]

Outstanding...deeply emotive and rendered me reflective, beautifully voiced...

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

Thanks for such valuable review

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

Thanks for beautiful review

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Lovely write
His love was endless sea
With no one left to love
With every heart beat
The tears of blood
Drowned him in
The oblivion
The oblivion of
Endless mourning....

Terrific words... this poem starts very well and ends with very strong words.. Good one!!!