Without you, I am Dead...

story of a poor blind girl, no one ever cared for her but suddenly a rich boy suffering from last stage cancer fell in love with her and treated her like a true princess...then he dies and.....

         Like a bag of flesh

       Rotting in the streets

  Everyone looked, no one see

        Alone in the rain

         In deep pain

      I cried till my tears dried

  Everyone looked, no one feel

       What I used to believe

           World is insane

       Like an angel you came

  Filled my dark world with bright flame

       Warm love like a touch of God

       Every moment I spent with you

               I never forgot

            Before you I was dead

            And now without you

               I am dead all dead

   Without you I am dead...I am dead...

         Amazing world that I saw

   Through your eyes, as I am Blind

          Sunset and sunrise

         Colourful butterflies

     All this changed my Mind

          Your endless love

      Fulfilled my every wish

          You are my soul

      My heart beats for you

    Now there is just a black-hole

 You are the only meaning my life had

     Without you my heart is sad

        Before you I was dead

    And now without you I am dead

      All dead, all dead, I am dead

   Without you I am dead...I am dead...

        

                                                    By: shivalik kalsotra

Author's Note

story of a poor blind girl, no one ever cared for her but suddenly a rich boy suffering from
last stage cancer fell in love with her and treated her like a true princess...everything was perfect for blind girl for a moment but unfortunately guy dies of his disease(he never told about his disease to blind girl) these are the last words of her before she....

Reviews

[Mirza Mehak]

before she.....
:(
this expression you have brought out is wonderfully heart-wrenching .
thank you for sharing

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

thanks for understanding, for your valuable time and for this wonderful review

[Bleh]

This is a really sad and beautiful poem. Thank you. I love this.

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

thanks for appreciation...gratitude

[Deepika]

This is an extremely painful and intense tale. Only a depressed soul can understand the pain of another miserable heart. It's really painful having none to hear our woes and even worst to loose the only ray of hope.

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

thanks for your time and valuable comment