Delicate Prominence

Delicate Prominence

 

Your will is as strong as a diamond and your beauty surpasses a rose,

Even with the distance we are from each other our relationship steadily grows.

I often dream of your angelic presents in the day and even more at night,

Your skin soft and silky very clean and oh so bright!

Your smile has the power to abolish poverty,

And your honesty can honestly bring to truth all dishonesty.

To be with me is what you choose I feel I don't deserve you,

How you do what must be done to keep me from feeling blue.

You’re an angel in disguise; an alleviator through your tries,

You’re a precious jewel with magnificent captivating eyes.

The beauty you encompass redefines life,

And I’m telling you girl, I’ll help vanquish your strife.

If life, were a game you’d be flawless in success,

Because your too smart to lose, and too invincible to stress!

As this poem comes to an end let me tell you I love you,

And what ever you put your mind to you always can do.

 

Reviews

[poddar kushal]

a bit long lines. but it is joyful to read your heart felt words.