YOU'RE NOT ALONE (by LolaWrites)

Please.. Never Give Up. Please.

Your joy n happiness
Your sadness n grief;
All these I've felt
All these I feel!

I see through that perishable mass you call flesh,
Through the skin deep walls of your fence
I see you
I see the real you.

I feel the weight of your emotions when you cry, when you scream
Your heart is heavy
But no one will listen
You're alone in this world,
or so you think

Please,
Know that I am here with you,
I have always been!
Even through the darkest of nights
And through the toughest of times
I am here with you,
I have always been.

I live on the air in your nostrils
In the feel of your heartbeat
Never give up! Please...
As long as there's life in your lungs,
I am with you,
I'll keep you warm
I am... hope

Author's Note

I challenged LolaWrites (a sister n a friend) to disregard any and all writing rules and "just dig deep and write anything straight from (her) heart"

This is what she submitted!!

Please, be constructive

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The below lines are needed often in a lifetime.
"I am with you,
I'll keep you warm
I am... hope"
Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote