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apparently i lost a war i didn't know we were fighting.
i was too busy abscessing over your heart.
sorry if you have to have it cut out.
that was never my intention.

 

you should've lost your foot.

Author's Note

there are no spelling mistakes.

Reviews

[Collette]

Clever little ditty here...the play on words keeps it light hearted, yet the material is somewhat dark. I especially dug the irony of the ending...cut and dry classic. I dig your style. Not many can pull off simplicity with success, but you've clearly made an artist out of your ink....thanks for sharing.

[Steven]

abscessing... brilliant.

[Hotel Mornings]

This is clever. Even though it's kind of dark it's still rather...cute (not the best word of choice but it's what I'm going with). This isn't like most poems you see on this site, it's rather refreshing.