suicide note

life stories can be told in death notes I wrote this influenced by a deceased patient at my father's

in the hospital room three four(34)
the nurse comes and open the door
but she finds no breath or pulse
she runs off to call someone else
they try to bring me back to life
but I'm hanging on too tight

they think blowing air is the life kiss
when all I need is you to touch my lips
let me tell you my story or let's just say death
why I chose to leave the world
and my family to miss

'cause I couldn't see you move on
and forget all about me
thought you were the one
who would change my destiny
so it killed me before I killed my self
after I gave everything I could give

because of you I preferred dying
doctors knew and stopped trying
and when you read this remember crying

Author's Note

leaving love behind is leaving a life damaged
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[Gamitsuki]

true.......love is the flowers in life.......i wish you get well and no bad news has to reach the ear of any of your parents......surely that will happen.....I bet....!! this is an truly NiCe piece.....keep going......!:-)