Lockedup inside

 

 

I sit in the

 

  corner of this room...

 

still hoping that

 

you will resque me...

 

knowing that your the one

who Locked Me Up Inside

 

 

-Eternal Kim

Reviews

[Annelise]

This seriously gave this poem such a quiet sadness, its beautiful. It has a subtle depth now. :)

[Jinx's Heart]

Oh, gosh! This poem is so subtle, yet so loud at the same time. A lot of pain can be interpreted in this poem. It breaks my heart. Well, well written!

[Annelise]

This is an interesting piece. very short and to the point. I feel as if you could elaborate slightly, and i don't like the exclamation point at the end, i think it might be more effective without it. I do like the feeling of helplessness. You have a very emotional writing skill and in the end this was good, could be better with revision.