me now (6 words)

the space between innocence and wisdom

Reviews

[~amanda~]

i find it ironic that my review is longer than your poem... but i had to tell you how profound that is!
i was enthralled my just the one sentence... fabulous!

[J-Rod]

Awesome. Very well said.

[Jason Henry]

brilliant!

[Michael]

It reminds me of the writing exercises way back when in school. Although I must say you did a much better job things than I ever did back then. I guess it is natural to think of haiku or senryū due to the length but to me it is more personal than that, more like boiling away all the nonessentials and leaving only the core of who you are. Sounds easy but really hard to do.

Nice job

[INSURGENT*76]

they are one in the same ... no?

[The Mad Prophet]

Wow, like the space inbetween void and time. Very well done, very creative. Makes me want to reply, but six words is way to short, yet my life has hardly anything worth telling. WISDOM, my biggest gift, and it is great to see another person seeking it. Very well expressed, good job.

[Scott Lynn]

Are you familiar with the "My Life In Six Words" project? Look it up on google. It's pretty cool.

[Wellum Hulder]

Because of the title, I couldn't resist reading this and I gotta say I thought it was cool. Like a Haiku on steroids. And I like how the title and the line clearly relate to one another.

Wellum Hulder

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what would it be in one word? i admire short poetry. i believe that it is sometimes harder to write a short piece simply because every mark holds such power. good job!