velvet

velvet

A Poem by kimberley
"

soft erotica / a first kiss

"

 

Vibrant tension between us

Sparkling eyes colliding

People around disappear

When you are near

Senses befogged by your aura

Your closeness is all I want

All I can think about

Your warmth, your arms around me

Is all I need

Suddenly your lips so close

Your heat I can feel on mine

Moment purely divine

Your beauty engulfs

In my closing eyes

Softly your lips touch mine

World vanishes into nothingness

Sparks, and heartbeat

I sense the warmth of your lips

Slowly retreat, my eyes won't open

My knees of jello

Heat burns like fire

With a new touch of your lips

Heart beats to jump out my chest

Wonderful sensation when your lips

Touch harder, asking for more

Willingly I welcome your breath into mine

Heat mingling

Tingling through my veins

Ecstasy of pure bliss

Shyly your tongue in search

Timidly caressing

Time and space melt into heaven

My fingers roam your neck

To your silky curls

Combing through their softness

While your tongue

Tenderly caresses mine

And delicately pleases me

Your velvet plays around mine

Shows me carefully

Your hot intimacy

As I lay all the love

I feel for you into this

Wordless declaration ...

 

 

© 2009 kimberley


Author's Note

kimberley
a first kiss ...

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Good job! This poem is really well written overall, but at times your word choice is a bit redundant. I particularly enjoyed the last line though, "wordless declaration" is such a great description to sum up the rest of your great descriptions presented in this poem. Nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WoW !!! Very Well Described Indeed !!!
Just Beautiful !!!
Amazing !!!
WoW !!!
What A Most Wonderful Piece Indeed !!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is a great poem. It's very sweet yet sensual at the same time. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful in romantical. This brung me smiles. I loved it!. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's nice. Just like a first kiss.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very cute.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

God, this sounds like my first kiss with my boyfriend. You're good. You are very good.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its very good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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