i need you to be happy

If this song can make me smile

Sing it to me

Because I don’t want to show faces anymore

A moment is enough

You were just a try

Or just a chance

That should I take or not

 

 

If wearing this ring can make me happy

Just let me wear it

Other people might think it's just a grass that’s been tied into a ring

But to me it is the most beautiful thing I ever have

As long as I'm happy

 

 

If this dance can make me smile

Dance with me

Because I want you to be free from worries

Forever might be too much

An hour is perfect for me

But to love you

I might forget the steps

 

 

If loving you can make me feel happy

Just let me because it's impossible to stop me

Other people might feel disgust

But you are the happiest thing that ever happened in my life

There’s no more you now

Its just me

I'm not selfish or what

Actually I’ve given you enough

Its just me now..

As long as I'm happy

With you..

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

This is a good poem, and I like it very much, however, I think more could be done in the area of punctuation as all you seem to use are ilipsis' and it seems to be over-used. If I were you I'd have a look back on this poem and see what I could change that way.