Orison

Holly father, I want to talk...

Holly father,
We need to talk.
What had happened
To the world?

They gets angry
And got guns.
I am scary.
Should I run?

Brothers, sisters
Fight to death.
This is war.
It ring the bells.

I need an Angel,
Want to pray.
World means “danger”.
I can’t stay.

I want change it.
For my child.
They are screaming:
“You are wild!”

Giving up -
Your only way
To stay normal,
fits in place.

I won’t do it.
I am strong.
You can screw it.
What is wrong?

Holly father,
Can you help?
Live life better
Not just yelp.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A flowing prayer that begs pertinent questions about thew state of the world. I could not quite grasp the rhyming scheme and the firsdt two stanzas could be tidier?

Holly father,
We need to talk.
What has happened
To the world?

They get angry
And have guns.
I am scared.
Should I run?

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

i can see and feel your fear in this ever changing fast paced world. with guns and knives and terror and rape and all the ugly parts of life.
I see your prayer and hear your plea for peace. This is good. thanks for the read