If I Handed You A Gun

If I Handed You A Gun

 

If I handed you a gun

And said pull the trigger

Would you aim where I say

Or would it end like I figure

 

Slow in the dark

Quiet and restless

Not what I ask

Not this simple request

 

One endless fight

One endless night

Not what I ask

This one last request

 

If I asked would you comply

Or would you see through the lie

Author's Note

Any comments are appreciated. Just as a side note I don't use punctuation when I write poems.

Reviews

[Melissa Denuzzo]

Beautifully written! What inspired you? I love it, but it has different meaning for me. Curious to know what meaning it has for you.
And it's quite a talent to fit so much emotion into one beautifully styled poem.