I was in a great relationship but the long distance was hard on him and even though we loved each other we couldn't make it work and I got hurt
When you are happy When everything seems okay Your at your most vulnerable Because that feeling will never stay
When you feel on top of the world And your heart jumps for joy That world is just a slip from the end And it can be ruined by a simple boy
Well he's not really simple And not just a boy This was the one I'd do anything for The one that I completely adore
And it's over, he's now just a friend And being just that the pain will never end So when I have no heart because I gave it away Will I ever love anyone else again I'd rather not say
According to me, poems are better when grammar is ignored... But punctuation can do wonders... It can be a way of expression... Ignoring both aspects as u said this is an emotionally well built work.. With lots of aggressive personal touch to it.. Keep writing more..
According to me, poems are better when grammar is ignored... But punctuation can do wonders... It can be a way of expression... Ignoring both aspects as u said this is an emotionally well built work.. With lots of aggressive personal touch to it.. Keep writing more..
Well for starts, "Hi! I'm Sara!!", and I'm in love!! With writing, anything pertaining to literature really. I also love music, mushrooms, origami, cooking, being loved (that's always something to lik.. more..