Weatherman

It's actually a song, haha.

I don’t want to go out and play today
Even though everyone’s calling
I don’t want to go out and play today
I just don’t feel like falling

I don’t want to go out
I’d rather stay where it’s safe
Maybe some other day
I don’t want to get hurt

I don’t want to go out and play today
What if rains?
I know the weatherman
Said it’d be okay
But what if the clouds roll in?
What if he’s lying?
What if he’s lying?

What if (x3)
He’s lying?

Maybe I’ll go out and play today
Even if it rains
Maybe it’s worth the chance
Maybe I’ll take a chance, a chance

Reviews

[NaeNaeContraption]

Theres something about this one, totally awsomeness.

[WriterMe]

There is something very touching about this. Haha when I seem to like a writer on this site, I end up reviewing most of his/her works =P. Now I develop a complex for the fear of repeating myself over and over again.
But oh well =] Great poem =]

[Sseoni]

Cool poem! I really liked it! :D

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well done songster

[mo]

there's something very wickedly comforting about this song.

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

I was just gonna write "this is very much like a song" then I read your comment, and, well, there's no point in me saying that.
I thought this flowed well and kept a steady rhythm, and I could almost hear the tune in the back of my mind. Over all, an excellent write.