come back for a cup of tea

Of course your loved ones would love to have you back

I’d settle for even 10 minutes just to ask:

What were you thinking? Did you really mean it?

If there was a speck hope at the tunnel’s end

Would you have even seen it?

And where do we go from here?

When the noise and turmoil

Of this mortal coil disappears

Reviews

"If there was speck hope at the tunnel’s end" Your missing an 'A' from this line.

Apart from that teeny tiny mistake its a terrific little piece. Short and succinct.
Well done.