Quiet

Sun rise.

Its quite

an evening

In the dark 

 

Its a quiet evening

except a song of a lark.

 

Hours have past

The night carrys on.

They are coming now.

To take away the moon.

The darkness holds on tight.

It hugs the earth

with a sudden fright.

 

Slowly 

Slowly

Slowly

Here it comes.

The horizon is visible

The dark is drowning.

In the light.

Tis not time

to say good night.

 

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This is impressive for a twelve year old. Although simple, knowing your age makes it very amazing, considering the mystical tone and words you decided to use. It'll be very interesting to see your abilities grow as a writer.

Nice work.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Dempsey Wilson (D.L. Wi..]

Wow, Kiera!!! What a great poem! You are certainly talented beyond your twelve years. I'm very impressed. Nice work, kiddo!!

[Mystery Girl]

It is a lovley little poem! I enjoyed this!