Thought

About you,

How I want you,

How I need you,

Want to please you,

Can't control it,

Can't ignore it,

I won't push you away,

Don't make us,

yesterday,

thought,

about it,

How much i want it,

how much I need it,

just think about it.

Reviews

[Adeline]

I like this, It sounds like it could be a song, ever thought about writing one? :)

[Mystery Girl]

Itard to is hard to get controll of our own thoughts. Sometimes they can become our worst emeny! Good poem!

[Quill]

Nicely done. I like the free flow, like it's spilling right out of your ... .... soul.

[Dempsey Wilson (D.L. Wi..]

Wow! Very well done! It flowed nicely and was deeply erotic, but in a meaningful way. Powerful!

[Dani California]

I love this flow. Purely natural spill... all emotions exposed... gently, but powerful. I love free flows.. my fav!! And you did a great job!! Rhyme and flow are superb.

Nice!!