Talking To Myself

Girl who is "mental" thinks she is talking to her love of her life, but there is no life she is talking to herself the whole time.

 

Talking to my self

 

Let’s go away

 Jut you and me

So we can see

 Everything

Who you are

And who I am

We can talk about it  all

Talk about the weather

Talk about the government

Talk about the city

Talk about music

Talk about people

Until the sun is down

And we’ve said all that we can

Then we go home

And everything will change

Then there will be so much more to talk about

So that’s just what we do tomorrow

Author's Note

Improvement?

Reviews

[K-Monay]

I love this one.

[KieraCrimeScene]

Thank you! I never really considered my self as a "writer" and just reading all these reviews made me feel really great about my writing. Thanks!

[Vonnette]

For me, I don't see the need to improve. It's straightforward. It's simple and complicated all at once. I especially like the end where you say, "And we've said all that we can

Then we go home

And everything will change

Then there will be so much more to talk about

So that's just what we do tomorrow
It implies that after every thing is said, it will not be the end, but instead, the beginning. The works created will create a need for new words. That's what getting close to someone is about. That's why I like it so much. It sounds like the beginning of something very special. I like the way you write. I am interested to see more.