IF

THis was for my sister. I think this is ok. Its one of my first decent ones.

 

If

 

IF we could fly

It would be grand

 

If we could walk through walls

 It would be sly

 

If we ate sand

 It would be crazy

 

If we invented homework machines

 It would be lazy

 

Some things are fun crazy and lazy

But most of all

Do it your own way

And soon enough you’ll be shown a day

That’s all meant worth trying

And better than flying

Author's Note

whateverr.
=]
just tell me what ya think.

Reviews

[Chistie]

It was cute!! I read it to my kid and he loved it!!

[Legion]

What do you mean "if" we could fly? And what could be better than that? I just don't get it. LOL Carefree and fun, that is what this poem is. :)

[Melissa]

I think this expresses your free spirit and a positive way or humorous way of looking at things.

I like this line here "Some things are fun crazy and lazy" I think that sums up your poem well.

Thanks for sharing.