Forever

I think it sucks. It is my first one. Third grade. =]

 

Forever

When some one frowns

It seems dark stormy clouds turn down on us

When some one smiles

The whole world shines for a while

 

 

Dark or bright were always in fright

But when we have each other

We work together

And face our fears forever

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

Wow!! Great write!!It really emphasizes the quality of team-work.Or maybe you're talking of romance??
Dunno...
I especially liked the first verse.It's so good!!
Well Done!!