Don't Look Down

one of my earlier ones. Not my best work, please be nice. =]

 

One person looks down,

When another says don’t,

 

Because all that’s there for them to see

Is the fear and horror that lies beneath their feet

 

Things they love

Or things they hate

 It all leads to a different fate

 

Hidden beneath years of wonders

It is well concealed

But still to come the true ones to be revealed,

 

Images of envy

The ones we wish to be

 

So do yourself a favor and don’t look down

Reviews

Look down at what? I liked it but I got confuzzled... what is there?