Changes
A Poem by Kiddo
dead memories
blank faces
hibernation
new cases
old you
new me
blinking eyes
don't see
new friends
old strangers
time flows
telling dangers
once bare
now concealed
true colors
are revealed
empty thoughts
distant places
with blank memories
and dead faces
© 2008 Kiddo
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What a perfect placement of words and line structure. This poem tells many tales all at the same time, all speaking of change
Reading it line by line it states change
Reading it by even lines then odd lines, it still speaks of change
And reading every three lines it still speaks of change
Yet each change is a different shade, a different hue!
I loved the way you crafted words into such imagery and meaning!
Great Job!
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Added on February 12, 2008
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