Rain x Tears

Rain drops me remind me of tears

They keep falling when you want them to stop

When you need sun all you get is rain

The falling water makes you feel worse

But then even though the world

After it has poured

Shines brightly

And is full of life

The rain that washes away my sorrows

Is the most beautiful

 

Author's Note

the underlined words form a hidden messag/sentence. if I made faults, please tell me, I'll correct them. :)

Reviews

[Furlie]

... I have no words ;)

[Nenorocit/Hitsuki Rei]

Bittersweet poem, hm? 'Sweet sorrow is the most beautiful' is the hidden message, right?

Well, comedy comes hand in hand with tragedy and I liked how you compared the raindrops to tears. Its certainly an apt description. And the part about sweet sorrow, were you perhaps signaling out the fact that sorrow is needed to distinguish the sweetness from the bitterness?

Or am I reading too much into it. I found the 'But then even through the world' part confusing. It didn't seem to have any significance...so not very sure on this.

Overall, I liked the poem. Keep up with the good work!

[Expression]

I love it!
Leuk idee om er een hidden message in te doen!
Really love it!

X. Maisa