Life's a beach

Life is a beach

awesomw waves

that roll off and come back

to crash against the surf

seashells uncovered

stories to be told

 

Death is still a mystery

 

The only difference between

life and death

is the mark it make

 

Life sux

Life rocks

Life bites

and it blows

hard

Life puts a bullet in

your heart to match

 the dagger in your eye

Life will pass you by

without a care just because

it can

 

Death's afterlife is overrated

Hell has a nice ringtone and screensaver

it's a beach and it plays

music that'll make you shout

"yeah, sure, whatever"

People don't get it though

Hell isn't really a beach

but hell can be a real beach

i gues sheaven's nice

wouldn't ever know

i never got nvited to the

party

they said the invitation was

in the mail but in the meantime

i was better off going to hell

 

Life has it ups

Death has its downs

they both can really suck

 

Life and Death

are pretty much the same

the only difference between them

is the mark it makes

 

Life is a chance to make your mark

Death is the last mark yu make

 

Life can rock

no one is too sure about death so

Death can suck

 

Death leaves behind a tombstone and flowers

Life leaves a trail of memories

that can lead up to regret at your final hour

 

Life is bittersweet

Death is gri and happy

 

With life you get a chance to mock

whatever gets you off at the moment

with death, the ridiculed get

the last laugh...

 

An Epiphany

 

Now to think about it

Life and Death are pretty different

biggest difference

is the mark it makes

 

Life is a beach

awesomw waves

that roll off and come back

to crash against the surf

seashells uncovered

stories to play out

not yet finished

 

yet Death is unkown

i can't tell you much about it

i've never been dead

but when u die

be sure to send a postcard

i'll be at the beach

just remember

life is bittersweet

Author's Note

ignore grammar issues, done intentionally

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nicely written creative with great metaphors.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You hit it right on... life may be full of heartaches but can be full of wonderful surprises if you just try and once death comes it is all over so enjoy life while you can. Very nicely stated.