Fae

all i have to say as a full moon and at the beach

Oh come, Oh come litle one.

We call to you,

Open your eyes

And let your heart guide you to us.

Oh come, oh come little one.

Open you heart

And speak your wish.

We shall take you away from here.

Trust in us and we shall guide you.

Protect you from all of harms way.

We shall love and cherish you forever.

Oh come, Oh come little one.

Believe in us we shall not lie,

We shall not miss guide you for any reason.

Oh come, Oh come little one.

Love us and in return we shall

Keep you from all of the evil in the world.

We shall show you the way,

The love,

The light,

So hear us and come oh little one. . .

And live forever with us.

 

 

Reviews

[HeaVenK]

so good! I like your writing ♥

[Ghostshell]

I agree that this is perfect just the way it is. It sounds like an old faerie story about the fae wooing children into the woods. Since you were on the beach maybe they were sirens.

[Roze Collions]

its a very good poem sounds like something the goddess would say

[Just Me]

I really liked this. It doesn't sound like it needs anything else but go ahead and add stuff if you fell that it's not complete. I thought it was excellent. Great Write!

[DontBlink158]

i really liked it, i dont think it needs anymore, but you could add only if you wanted

[Kiari Sabon]

love this poem