awake

My memory is kind of foggy
My eyes are blurry "Lips of mine cold as ice"
If I should die before I wake, I pray to the lord my soul to take
My skin becoming pale
Eyes wide open
"Im either dying or already dead"
My heart giving up on me
While the smile on my face is no longer there
"peaceful so to speak"
I felt like I was dying but I was awake "my hair wasn't glowing"
In my bed I'm awake and dying alone "my heart stopped beating, my eyes wide open, no more breathing"
Seeing myself dreaming
"I could see sunshine as it hit against my eyes"
I felt the warmth of the sun across my back and face
"my hair started glowing, my eyes were seeing clearly, lips warm to the touch"
I'M DYING AWAKE AND ALONE
"kiss me goodnight and let the lord take me"
Lips of mine cold as ice
My hair dull influencing the loss of color
Piece by piece my soul is fading at the age of eighteen
"I couldn't breathe and my heart stopped beating"
My memory was fading
My eyes were blurry "I was rushed to the hospital to find myself needing a new heart"
I saw myself dreaming peaceful as my eyes finally closed "I'm alright"
I'm just AWAKE 🙌

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

good expression between consciences and unconscious. i lke the idea

[I am renee]

Thank you so much