I believe in love

I believe in love

If only I had that kind of love that

Would take care of me when

I’m sick and

Whip my tears away when I’m down

I don’t feel the way

I used to about him

The fact that I can’t feel

The blood pump to my chest

The fact that I just can’t hold his hand in front

His friends or

Kiss him with people around

Kind of hurts

I love him I do but

Does he love me?

I miss him

I can’t be with anyone else

Because if I do he’ll just get even more

Jealous and start hating me

I just think it’s funny 

How he can date someone else

And just move on from until

He gets bored and wants me

I want him

But does he really want me?

I want a relationship

That’s faithful or at least that

Will last for months

I believe in love but

I don’t believe he loves me

For me

I hate the fact that he’s with other

Girls but I can’t be with any other guy

I’m tired of waiting

For someone who doesn’t love

Doesn’t care about me

Doesn’t want me

Just the other day

“I told I don’t want to be here anymore”

As I was crying on the phone

“But baby I love you”

I CANT BE WITH SOMEONE WHO DOESN’T LOVE ME

Baby I love you please don’t go

I love you too but

Just let me go please

I cried for hours on the phone with him

“Trey please just kill me”

I believe in love

If it ever finds me

I believe in love if it ever guides me

Trey I love you too

But I just don’t want to be here anymore

“What do you mean?”

I want to die

Please kill me trey

I’m so afraid of what’s

Going to happen next to me

And him

But I love him no doubt

Does he love me?

Does he want me?

Does he need me?

Does he care about me, the way I Care about him?

Those questions come to mind every second I look at him

I just want you to save me

From what I’m about to do

I can’t think of anything but you

That night I got eight missed calls from him

I called back

And we talked for hours

But my whole world was shot down

From under me

“I was worried about you”

He says

I believe in love

Because it can be back and forth

But we’ll always have our differences

I just hope

That he loves me for me

I can’t wait forever

I can’t wait for somebody

That doesn’t want me

I believe in love but

Does Love believe in me?

Sometimes I feel if people knew how

I’ve been feeling since last summer

Would it matter?

I believe in love

Does it love me back?

WHAT IS LOVE EXACTLY

It’s an intense feeling of deep affection

So it says in the dictionary

Does he love me the way I love him?

I don’t want to wait anymore

I want to feel love again

The way it was before all

The fights happened

I just feel locked away from love

Too many days of feeling

Emotional and lost without him

I believe in love

But all I want is for him to love me back

 

 

Reviews

[Destiny Case]

Wow. Just wow. I really enjoyed this piece. I don't feel that the term, "enjoy" is the best word here, but I'm unsure of what else to say. I enjoyed this in the strangest way. It was brutal and provoking in a terrifying manner. I feel like love is something that we all question in some way. Whether we're questioning what love is, if we can love, or if we are loved in return. The questions are mess, and provoking, and I definitely feel that this piece captured that. I am left speechless with goosebumps and a flurry of mixed emotions and feelings.
I am blown away by this piece to say the least. Very well done! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future, and I'm wishing the best of luck to you!

[I am renee]

omg thank you so much lol and you are absolutely right about asking ourselves what love is really all about

[A. Amos]

Interesting, deep and very powerful. I enjoyed it

[I Am Svetlana]

My goodness, this piece is beautiful! A bit lengthy, but that isn't always a bad thing as long as it works and it does with this in particular. Relationships are tough to handle, no matter who you may be with. People must understand that relationships take two people's efforts, it can't survive on just one person. It then becomes unstable. People may seem perfect once you meet them, but we become unsure once we uncover the person inside, underneath. Some people deserve a second chance and others don't. It all just depends on what your heart tells you and if they are willing to truly show the effort they want to prove.

[Sarah Ramsbottom]

Honest. I love that, no one should ever have to be second in a relationship! Great read!

[I am renee]

thank you for understanding and reading

[Katie Flores]

this kind of feeling would terrify me. you are a stronger person than I, because I would not have the ability to hold on and survive those emotions. But it begs the question... Is it really love?

[I am renee]

thank you and no it really isn't love anymore

[TurtleClark]

Are there words to describe how powerful this is........probably but i cant find them

[I am renee]

thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[I am renee]

thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)