Trapped

this is just something i was working on last night, its kind of rough but thought i would give it a try !

‘You’re stupid! If you think he loves you your stupid, don’t you get it he is no good for you’ she yelled through the walls, her voice filled with piercing rage. No one understood loving him wasn’t a choice, if I had an option it wouldn’t be him but it is and there is nothing that can change that no matter how hard I try. It didn’t matter that they’d poisoned my mind with images of him kissing, embracing or kissing another I refused to even think about leaving him; I had to be with him because that’s what being in a relationship means sticking by them no matter what and working through the problems but surely  there was a limit to all these things? In all of this I felt trapped, it wasn’t like I could break free cause the only way out was something that seemed to be impossible, it was not an option. I love him, oh how I love him. I myself could not understand it so how could I possible explain what it felt like when I was with him, when I was in his arms. I cared for him so deeply that it tormented me in my sleep; even my spirit lay restless...

Reviews

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

Wow. Keep writing, I'm curious now.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

It's a nice start but it seems to be missing something, can't quite put my finger on it. But it does have potential. xo