You are the one!

Where would I go if I can't come to you?
You are the one who shows me the way of life,
You are the one who shows me path of faith and respect.

What would I do if I don't have you in my life?
You are the one who makes me see the good in world and best in me,
You are the one who makes me see me for me.

When would I let it go if I didn't had you?
You are the one who makes me realize that its not worth holding on,
You are the one who makes me understand its time to let go of every false feeling and regrets of life,

Who would I go to if I didn't had you in my life?
You are the one who makes me wish,
You are the who makes of hope to live a life that is filled with love.

Which are the things I would desire if I can't desire you?
You are the one who makes my heart beat,
You are the one who makes me feel compassion in life.

How would I live if I won't have you in my life?
You are the one who makes my life worth while,
You are the one who makes me love life for its incredible beauty.

Why would I live if you are not there in my life?
You are the one that makes sun shine and moon so bright,
You are the one that makes me live my life for nothing is more precious than a wonderful life.

Author's Note

This my first attempt at writing so please excuse me for some mistakes and I hope I am not worst.

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

there is a great underlying message here and some amazing uses of skill. Your word choice and point were excellent. your style was decent. just keep playing with it and you'll be better than most in no time :-)

[Kyaraa]

Thank you :-)

[Naina]

Nice piece of writing Kyaara..... Very emotional and touching poem.... I really liked it... Must say very nice attempt... Keep it up..!!