will i cry

heart warming,love,lonley,jealous,him,her,letter,secret

 

whats the point of love

espaially if you cant crybut whats the point of crying if it doesnt lastbut we call it love and we let it gowe do whats best to just go with the flow and we find ourselves crying all the time in the end because from the begining we were meant to be friends

so we end up falling and sraping our life ascar for eternity a reminder why

so let it all go and take a deep breath because whats the point of being in love if its just friends

 thats not love and thats not right but when its break up time thats just life

so tell me whats the point am i going to cry

life would be much better if love would try

Author's Note

just off of the top of my head
i got bored at school in second period

Reviews

[Yvette Shaw]

Without reading your note, I got the impression that it
was something off the top of your head...which is a good
thing. It can be a good way to express otherwise ignored
feelings and or emotions. It had that feel to it. Over
all I think I understood where you were going. I like the
concept of your words, but I found myself having to translate,
some of what you wrote into what I thought you meant.
Which is risky, as your actual point can get lost? When you
re-read it, I'm sure you'll see what I mean.
Good start, I liked it...You should get bored more often

Yvette Shaw

[Sarah]

I liked this, even though it was essentially stream of consciousness, it was still entertaining. Good job. (:

[Rosary]

the best poems, i believe, come of the top of your head. this ones good i like it. welcome to writers cafe by the way.