Apart

Apart

A Poem by KhelticRyder

 

Once we were lovers, not a day would pass without a soft word to one another.
Somehow, somewhere, someway we seemed to have drifted apart.
Never ending, never really beginning…simply apart.

© 2009 KhelticRyder


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This reached into me chest and touched my heart. Crazy, I know. Sometimes you just read things that really touch you. This piece did that for me. So much said in so little words.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it...it is short and sweet...and to the point.
Great Job :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stirring.....something most can relate too.......poignant......."sighs"

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but with a meaningful message that im sure
many people can relate too.
Great poem you did a great job in
stating what you wanted in a few lines.
Thanks for sharing, keep on writing

Best wishes

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KhelticRyder
KhelticRyder

Salem, OR



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