Please

Please tell me that when the sea recedes I will be able to find you again.

Please tell me that when all the fires burn to slow dying embers, I will be able to comfort you all my life.

Please show me that all this love that fills me when I think of you will be consumed by every inch of you.

Please just tell me that when you think of me that you feel as I do, you feel the beauty and the pain suddenly.

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

Beautiful work of art. Vivid imagery and views we can all imagine. The most powerful phrase in this poem is "you feel the beauty and the pain suddenly." That is the essence of pure love, emotional equilibrium with your partner. Nicely done!