“they eyes have it” - khat

dont forget me still here :pleading_face:

“they eyes have it”

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You don’t have to hide it; I see what you do… I know what goes on inside when you think no one’s watching…

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Don’t worry, I know what happens, you don’t have to tell me… and even if you don’t tell me, I still know what happens--

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You’re not slick; they know�"

They know…

[echoing] they know--…

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I’m closed off from the world; they don’t see what happens, but they do�"my silent wishes are warded; guarded, knocked down�"built up just to get obliterated.

They think they see me coz they paint eyes where my Spirit lingers, they point knives instead of pointing fingers; hold the gun, I think I’ll pull the trigger…

 

Reviews

[PlayWrite]

nice

havent seen this format used

this is different

[FaeryQueen]

oh, thank you, i havent had a review in a while so this caught me off guard, thank you so much

i shud start posting again

but im not sure anymore coz i post my poems on a different website

it still feels good to come back here to host contests, its like a breath of fresh air thats familiar

[PlayWrite]

its no problem

i always notice writings on here that stand out, i guess im always looking for something to inspire my own writing


and yeah, you should post more stuff, im sure youre a good writer

[Kamusta41]

Nice poem. I love this one
Keep writing!