“To Capture the Moment in 4 Lines or Less”

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“To Capture the Moment in 4 Lines or Less”

KH

 

 

 

 

My heart is yours to keep;
the beats within are
 intensifying

 

 

 

 

With each one, comes another
 and another and
 suddenly, my eyes
 are filled with
 so many lights

 

 

 

Keep this heart of mine
 in yours; I’ll cup my hands
 under your eyes
 to catch the
golden teardrops
you cry

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

these are 3 lines broken up into little stanzas

Reviews

[Emily]

I love that last line!
Keep it up!!

[Nisreen]

Pretty sweet ..... Good job :)

[FaeryQueen]

thank you!!

[iamshadowine]

so pretty! i really like the way you write your poems! well done! keep writing =)

[FaeryQueen]

thank you!!