"I Guess You're Right"

"I Guess You're Right"

By: Khatoon Hazara

This is my gun

The Words are my bullets

My aim is off, but hey, maybe it'll be close

I guess you're right

When you said I couldn't forget you

When you said I was special; something only you could figure out

That is true; even if I never told you; I am not human

It appears as if I have been born human; yes, in a manner of speaking; I am human

But my soul, oh, my captors, my soul; something you will never comprehend

My soul

My soul aches for you; my lover

It's reversed now, that seems to be apparent

My body contains intimate emotions

My body is something comprehensible, is it not?

Or are human minds' beginning to look like what I've thought of them to?

If that's the case, then I guess you're right

I have become restless

I have become uncontrollable, even by my own standards

Can you adhere to my definitions?

Or are humans still so indecisive?

Somehow, you're still so precious to me

No, not somehow, it's not a coincidence

Don't make me laugh!

You're funny!

Talking about how "we found each other by the fate of God"

Makes me laugh

But... didn't we though?

To detest an entity as strong as God... would be an act of Mass Extinction towards the human race

Because if you think things through, the first thing I think of when I hear the word 'strong' is 'God'

The unified version of 'God' anyhow

Or is it that Fate itself is God?

I can never be too sure

But things such as Fate, Destiny, Karma

They all seem to have a significance over me

As do you; I'm not changing the subject, I swear to you

From the bottom of my heart, I love you

There could be nothing that could be said to describe how I feel every time that I think of you

Nothing... at... all....

Reviews

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
I really liked it!
Keep it up!