Songs on the Fly [1]

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I’ve been,

On the corner of happy and,

Depressed,

Oh, depression, that silver lining turned inside out,

Love, I got what I got,

And I am where I am,

Because of you,

And how far you’ve gone with me,

And,

How far you’ve taken,

Doll, I wish, for some resistance,

And you,

Never knew,

What you did to me,

Oh,

Where have you been?

Oh, darling,

I’ve been begging,

To know about your whereabouts,

Where,

Where were you,

Where,

Where were you,

When,

When I was down,

Where were you,

When I was blue,

Oh, where have you been?

Oh, no, you shouldn’t have missed,

No, you shouldn’t,

Oh, god, now here I go,

Telling people I don’t know,

Where has my lover gone?

Where, oh, where, could he be?
Why is he,

So far from me,

God knows,

I’ve known,

And god knows,

Love,

It isn’t all that hard,

But love,

I got it from somewhere, I must’ve,

I got it from somewhere,

Goodness me,

Love, won’t you please, come,

And shelter me,

Just,

Like you always did before?

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
such longings...............
beautifully done....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Valentine]

Once gone...sometimes always gone. Valentine

[Moonlight]

It is a beautiful poem. Forgive me if it is not, but it seems more like a song. And even though you recite through your words the saga of heartbreak, it is a really delicate and beautiful tale. Loved it. :)

[Emily]

Loved it!
I like how you have the poem to the left!
Keep on writing!!

[PhoenixDown]

Sums it up right there!
Sometimes it takes, far longer - than expected.
Bravo piece. Really shines through.

[FaeryQueen]

as i was singing this, i was writing it too

[PhoenixDown]

I knew it!.

[FaeryQueen]

hahahahaha