"You"

on the spot; raw

"You"

shining

my heart

glowing

my call

hear me

your strong arms

hands

fingers

touch me

i'm falling

i need you

crying years

i love you

so much

needed you

for so long

crazy

i need to

get out of here

stuck 

time

barricaded us

chains

stuck on me

keys

lost

i'm breaking free

don't cry

shed a teear

remember i was drowning

of my pain i put forth hope

and glory

you never saw my stitches

the ones i call love

whips my back

the sun

urges me to follow my heart

by the way the sun yells

and screams

tune it out

and hold me close

close your eyes

i'm not the city type

the country's way too quiet for me

i like the crazy and unexpected

knocking on your door

nobody's home

but you're saying new adventure

awaits far beyond the plain and simple

so let's run

run

run

and never look back

Reviews

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Falling to love thourgh the your words. Is more than beautiful.

[Lily Finch]

Wowww...its so lovely piece...

[DeerInHeadlights]

you have a way.. i cant explain it, but it is almost as if you have read some of my stuff and made it your own.. those feelings. those things. the way you see it, how you feel it.

[FaeryQueen]

you were a new writer to me, i only read 'from this view'. thank you.