Audacity

on the spot

confusion

swirls around me 

as i continue

to live

like someone 

who doesn't want to 

die

like someone 

who wants to 

fly

with their wings

so full of life

and light

their wings

are as feathery 

as my mind

something

fragile

a broke

enterprise

of something artificial 

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Yes, pretty audacious, indeed, to hope to thrive full of life in the midst of all this confusion. And we're so fragile. Here only for a minute. It does seem like a broken, artificial enterprise, doesn't it.

Again, I liked this very much. Nice piece.

Best regards,

Rick