minesweeper

 one

could go off

at any moment

as our barren minds

are bombarded

by the sun

we struggled to keep the pace

one false move

and like a chain of domino's 

we may implode upon each another

one over the other 

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

Simple and to the point; this is a great read about love and human nature. It is our way to climb and sprawl upon one another. Also a great poem about cause and effect. Thanks for sharing such a wonderfully, well written poem with me and have a wonderful day.

[Fatema]

this simple and sweet
short and beautiful

[FaeryQueen]

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[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Nice poem with a message!