the pit of my stomach

something like cloud puffs

a bomb of cloud flurries

snow falls

and then a rainstorm of thought bubbles

scattering

spreading

tatt

tatt

tapping

on the pit of my stomach

Reviews

[Emily]

Great poem!
You did a very good job on this one!
Keep it up!

[Fatema]

this poem is like a storm of weather in your stomach

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I liked this!
A randomly penned fun piece.