Moving On

on the spot

the mountains

are too heavy

for me

to move 

and my hands

are too tired

holding on

so tight

i feel like

falling

slowly

but i won't

i'll just 

move along

Reviews

[Asmus Green]

Some mountains were never meant to moved anyway. Living life requires planning and strategy. Moving along is an important part in living life, there are enough mountains in this world to challenge. And enough time to prepare how to move them in the future.

Nice little piece here. Says a lot about how we fix a lot of problems.

[Amy R]

life's always hard, so sometimes the better thing to do is to move on! :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Life is always hard but we need to live it wisely and optimistically.
Nice piece.

[wordman]

sometimes we just get tired and we have to move on