Stronger Than Ever

on the spot

no

i know

i was wrong

to let them out

but

i don't know

i mean

shouldn't we give them a chance

or

is that

too 

open

do you think 

maybe they'd take advantage 

of me

they commute

better with each other

than myself

but

i mean

i guess i should give them 

the benefit of the doubt

it's only fair

right?

but now

i guess

i'll tune them out

for now

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

Good advice, and this poem could be interpreted as bullying meaning that someone (you or someone you're talking about is being bullied). It's best to keep one's head down and to themselves than to stick out in a crowd and always want attention. Thanks for sharing such a well written poem and have a wonderful day.

[Valentine]

Some things are better kept to oneself. Valentine

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work... I love the way you pen the confusion in your own mind.. awesome write!

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

are you talking about flatulence in this one? If not, read it again, but keep farts in mind. hilarious

[FaeryQueen]

i read it again, and i can see how you got farts, truly genius, but no. it could be though. maybe it is...

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

i was like, what!, but of course its deeper than that and yet the "deeper" it goes the more i have to laugh at my immaturity

[FaeryQueen]

we're all immature, it's how we grow up!

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

I am with Wordman....sounds like those pesky thoughts are fighting in your mind....in any event your poetry is beautiful and expresses your emotions with eloquence!! :0)

[wordman]

sounds like a battle going on in your mind !

[FaeryQueen]

you don't even know! but thank you for reading and commenting, really means a lot to e and yeah, i have a lot of inner battles every single day, no one knows about them because... well, if they did, i'd have to be sent to the nuthouse

[wordman]

you`re welcome,and it`s a battle from angels and demons.we all have them,some more intense than others