Starry Sky

on the spot

blazing

and the stars will continue to whisper

sweet somethings into your ear

for so many breezes

that passed onto days

and weeks

and months

but i will stay right here

waiting for my starry sky

to come around

here i'll wait

eternity

may pass away

but i'll still

be 

in awe

at the starry sky

Reviews

[Asmus Green]

I often get lost in the starry sky at night. Does not matter whether I'm sleepy, fully awake or even drunk out of my mind. I'll always find myself staring at a clear star covered sky. And every time I wish I could just take off from the earth and roam the awe worthy sky

Very sweet piece!

[Jen Walters]

Some of the best answers come to us when we are alone contemplating the universe. When we sit and commune with nature, the starry sky, the ever churning ocean, the heated desert whatever it is, if we commune with it and get in touch with our inner selves; we can learn anything and everything just by watching, feeling, and listening to what is around us. The night has its own story to tell as well as the day time. It is all part of the circle of life. Thank you for sharing such a wonderfully descriptive poem with me. I love all of your work and have a great day.

[Valentine]

Some of God's creations leave the viewer awestruck. The starry sky, a sunset or a beautiful sunrise. No one paints pictures like He does. Valentine

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Nice piece.
Shining star's light could be felt.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

A stunning write full of imagery and imagination!

[Amy R]

I love the way u expressed the starry sky!
it gives it a magical feeling.
well done!