Gimme A Reason

for him; (so i'm writing on paper again, like a human being)

i need

your voice

of reassurance

that we 

will be

just fine

i never really

realized

my feelings

didn't really

strive for the high

but that was before

and i never understood this reaction

gimme a reason

for not taking action

you won't have one

coz you mean that much to me

i'm still in love with you

if you haven't already known

this time

that we have together

is short

so let's just

keep on riding each other

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

I think this is a great love poem. Flow is smooth and the ideas are crisp and clear. I love love poems and songs and such. Thanks for sharing such a great poem

[Shah Sabia]

I suggest you to shape up the end in a beautiful way again, and it'll be a superb write.
Nonetheless a good effort :)

[FaeryQueen]

thanks.............................

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

the end seemingly out of place in this. restructure the scheme a smidge and presto, there it will be

[FaeryQueen]

thanks.........................