So High

on the spot (for him)

spread

eagle

on the floor

bruised ego

and nothing more

you said you love me

come and show me tonight

i've been waiting for this moment for so long

right here

 laying on your bed

is where we belong

my shirt is off

my pants are down

come and get me

make me make a sound

you said i look pretty 

under the bed sheets

we're talking dirty

playing with our hands

who knows when this'll end

you've got that something special

up your sleeve

don't make me ever

never wanna leave

Author's Note

i was singing this at 2am. it's been stuck in my head ever since.

Reviews

[Shah Sabia]

I hope you've limited the audience for this write.
Well shaped, beautifully written.

[Jen Walters]

I would put a warning on this one, as its highly suggestive and you don't know who else is reading this. Just to protect your work I mean. I like the unusual style of this piece as well because I typically don't write from right to left as shown here. Great piece though and thanks for sharing and have a great day.

[FaeryQueen]

i'd rather not, because i want to be open... i'm not shy about any of my feelings... but thanks sio much for the suggestion!

[Jen Walters]

well I was just saying its great to be open but when I signed up one of the rules was that if it talks about anything offensive then it could be taken down if it doesn't have a warning. Just trying to help!!!

[FaeryQueen]

ok thanks!!!!

[Jen Walters]

I love all of your work though, I really appreciate honesty when it comes to poetry.

[FaeryQueen]

:) means a lot to me

[Jen Walters]

Thanks, I try to be reasonable about my comments

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Tonality. Tonality. Tonality. You starrt off with this fun , sexy, mischevious playful thing and then it start around the fourth stanza to get romantic. If thats the arc and I missed it pologies but opinion only, no offense, it changes stripes. Gets meloncholic and semi romantic. I would and again no offense if it were MINE I would break these into two and explore more similar terms of each. Hope you are not offended by my take on a nice writ.

[FaeryQueen]

no, i am not :) thank you. i think... i'll fix it

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

what do i know. Im a bonafide idiot but if you do good luck on your sure to be wealthy endevour.

[FaeryQueen]

thank you, i think i fixed it, i mean the whole other was not what i sang i just sang this part, the one that i erased was rubbish. but thank you.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

editing is a b***h. i hate hearing how this should be fixed but ultimately it seems best and sometimes uncovers the truth of the writing. i like your go at this.

[FaeryQueen]

it really really is, but if i didn't edit it, the mood would've been ruined