Thou Art A Beautiful And Terrifying Sin To Behold

on the spot (this maybe for him, kind of, i dunno, i feel like it is...)

gift me

with the sight of the stars in the night

don't leave

it'd be much too much for my heart to gather

you mean it all to me

you mean too much

i can feel your love each and every time

don't you ever change for no one else

i wish to tell you

sweet moon

hung by a thread in the sky

tell me of your stories

sweet

sweet

moon

i'm breaking

out of this shell i've been encased in for so long

i'm finally able to see the thin rays of the sun

you've led me down endless winding roads

and i am forever in your heart

lost

lost

once i was lost

nothing to become of me

let go

let go of me

i'm nothing but dangerous to you

i once thought i would cause you loss and pain

but now that i know that the sun shines on everyone

i can love again

i can love

you

now it's time

to see the truth

are you ready?

hold my hand

and walk me in the grueling sunlight

let the sun whisper into my hair

let the wind comb his fingers through my secrets

our undying love for each other

cannot compete with anyone else's

i love you deeply

love

love

love?

what is love

but a word

enthralled in all of us?

love

oh, you mischievous demon

you are so overrated

Reviews

[Satan]

You have a gift with words Khatoon. This is a very beautiful poem =]

[Jen Walters]

I love this, its beautiful full of alliteration, love, joy, pride at being in love and pride in discovering oneself through being in love. I have made this journey myself, and it has been long, hard, and I am still on it, but my husband's love and God's love through my husband has helped me. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem with me, and have a great day.