Something More

on the spot (for him)

the sun

sea

moon

stars

universe

they're all 

pretty much 

envious

of my heart

my love

they're envious of us

though we may now know anything at all

the heavenly embodiment of true power

comes 

from 

love

love

ha! love

 has no idea

 what it's dealing with!

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

Very descriptive, love the alliteration here. Love can be powerful and uplifting, especially the love from within ourselves. Thanks for sharing such a well written piece and have a great day.

[FaeryQueen]

thanks for reading!

[Jen Walters]

oh you're quite welcome and feel free to check out some of my other poetry as well. Have a great day.